Dear my future roommate,
To
start off, you may not have gotten the best roommate in the world, but at least
I have experience living in a dormitory. For all three years in high school, it
was compulsory for every student to live in a dormitory inside campus. Two
people shared one room and I had five different roommates ever since. So my
lifestyle is all about sharing, tolerance, and understanding. If you need help
on anything, feel free to ask! I'll always be there for you.
When
we start school, you should prepare yourself to have some fun because every day
will be crazy and new. I have a wide range of different hobbies starting from Youtubing
to playing lacrosse. So you might often spot me recording myself with my camera
or fiddling with the strings on my lacrosse stick. And every other day, intriguing
activities will seize my interest that inspires and motivates me into action. I
might suddenly announce myself as vegetarian and start living off green plants
and fruits. I might even start training my left hand to become ambidextrous. And
you will one day see me bursting into the room, with blazing gleams in my eyes
and suggesting an absurd project to do with you if, and only if, you are okay
with it. What I really wanted to tell you is that I respect other's hobby as
much as I adore mine. There will be times when my activities get in your way
and trouble you. Then, I beg you to tell me truthfully and directly what is
exactly troubling you because often when I am too deeply endorsed into my
project, I get dim about my surroundings.
I
haven't got a single clue about what you like, what you hate, whether you peel
oranges from the top or the bottom, or whether you take a shower in the morning
or at night. But that doesn't matter, because I'm quite flexible (both
literally and not literally). I find it delightful every time I meet a person
with interesting and different habits, views and values. The process of getting
to know someone has always been enjoyable. Listening to other's worries and
woes, gossip and outraged complaints is an everyday custom. Maybe it's because
I'm more of a listener than a talker. In fact, I'm not much of a talker. And ironically
because of that, I am touchy about my privacy. I am very unwilling to share my
privacy with anyone. Not just talking about it, but getting my private space
infiltrated in any way. Yes, it is quite selfish in a way, but that is the only
picky problem that I have. Honestly, I'm not much of a cleaner so I don't mind
dirty rooms, untidy closets and scattered cookie crumbs. But I really do mind a
lot about my privacy.
It
feels very awkward, writing a letter to my future roommate when I just finished
my first year in high school. Life in a university feels distant and unreachable,
something like you only see in movies but never experience yourself. But at the
prospect of meeting you doesn't worry me at all, but excites me. I really do
look forward to the new campus life. Hope to see you soon!
- Eun Kyung Yoon
oh my goodness!!!! I am soo glad I asked you to join Scriptura :D :D :D :D This is one of the best essays I've ever read, and if I were a college administrations officer I'd definitely consider you with great interest :P I looove your perky, unique, energetic tone: it perfectly captures your cheerful spirit and your sense of fun + your 개념있는 side. ^^ I liked the part where you mentioned that you already have dorm experience: that was an interesting and relevant touch I hadn't thought of. :)
ReplyDeleteThere were a few slightly awkward phrases that might have sounded smoother with different word choices, like:
"I respect other's hobby as much as I adore mine" -> "I respect others' hobbies" might sound better?
"with blazing gleams in my eyes" -> "with my eyes blazing" or "with my eyes gleaming"
" I get dim about my surroundings." -> dim has a connotation of being stupid, which you definitely aren't
"literally and not literally" -> literally and metaphorically
But on the whole, it was an awesome essay. I admire you and I wish my writing style was as /alive/ as yours :)
ohhhh thanks!! :D
Deleteyeah I think the phrases that you've corrected sounds much more smoother!that 'll really improve my essay ! thanks again!! :DDD
gosh I was literally SQUEEZING my brain into writing this!!!
happy that you liked it!! :)
thanks man
ReplyDeleteI would never want to be your roomie too ;)